batch.motif.sufi-omar-khayyam-sufistic-quatrains-gutenberg-l3552-l3652
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record_id: batch.motif.sufi-omar-khayyam-sufistic-quatrains-gutenberg-l3552-l3652
source_text_path: texts/public-domain/sufi/project-gutenberg/sufistic-quatrains-omar-khayyam.md
passage_locator:
label: XLIV. / XLVIII. / LVIII. / LXIII.; lines 3552-3652
start: '3552'
end: '3652'
translation: The Sufistic Quatrains of Omar Khayyam
notes: Generated from OpenAI Batch run motif-extraction-2026-04-28-high-priority;
human review required.
canonical_text:
quote: ''
summary: The passage presents quatrains and notes on mortality, the non-return of
the dead from the road beyond darkness, prophetic revelations as sleep-stories,
the soul's search for the afterlife, and heaven and hell as inward states or reflections.
language: English
quote_policy: summarized
literal_observations:
- id: obs:1
text: Threats of Hell and hopes of Paradise are contrasted with the certainty that
present life passes away.
category: speech
evidence_refs:
- ev:1
- id: obs:2
text: A flower that has bloomed is said to die forever, and a cited parallel says
withered tulips will not bloom again.
category: object
evidence_refs:
- ev:1
- ev:2
- id: obs:3
text: Many people are said to have passed through a door of darkness before the
speaker's generation.
category: action
evidence_refs:
- ev:3
- id: obs:4
text: No one returns from the road beyond darkness to report about it, although
the living must also travel it.
category: sequence
evidence_refs:
- ev:3
- id: obs:5
text: The editor states that the road-and-non-return image recurs in the ruba'iyat
and cites parallel quatrains.
category: relationship
evidence_refs:
- ev:4
- ev:5
- id: obs:6
text: Devout and learned predecessors who burned as prophets are described as having
told stories after waking from sleep and then returning to sleep.
category: action
evidence_refs:
- ev:6
- id: obs:7
text: A cited Persian parallel says accomplished figures did not make a road out
of the dark night but told a fable and went to sleep.
category: action
evidence_refs:
- ev:7
- id: obs:8
text: The speaker sends his soul through the Invisible to learn about the afterlife.
category: action
evidence_refs:
- ev:8
- id: obs:9
text: The soul returns and says that it itself is Heaven and Hell.
category: speech
evidence_refs:
- ev:8
- id: obs:10
text: A cited parallel says the soul searched beyond the heavens for Tablet and
Pen, heaven, and hell, and was told they are within the self.
category: action
evidence_refs:
- ev:9
- id: obs:11
text: Heaven is described as a vision of fulfilled desire, and Hell as the shadow
from a soul on fire cast onto darkness.
category: attribute
evidence_refs:
- ev:10
- id: obs:12
text: A cited parallel describes Hell as a spark from worries and Paradise as a
tranquil moment.
category: attribute
evidence_refs:
- ev:11
- id: obs:13
text: The editor notes an influence from the Mantik ut-tair distich stating that
heaven and hell are reflections of goodness and wrath.
category: relationship
evidence_refs:
- ev:12
figures:
- id: fig:1
name_or_label: speaker
description: First-person poetic speaker who reflects on life, death, heaven, hell,
and sends his soul through the Invisible.
role_refs:
- role:1
evidence_refs:
- ev:1
- ev:8
- ev:10
- id: fig:2
name_or_label: my Soul
description: The speaker's personified soul, sent through the Invisible, returning
with an answer about Heaven and Hell.
role_refs:
- role:2
evidence_refs:
- ev:8
- id: fig:3
name_or_label: myriads before us
description: Those who previously passed through the door of Darkness and do not
return to report the road.
role_refs:
- role:3
evidence_refs:
- ev:3
- id: fig:4
name_or_label: Devout and Learn'd
description: Predecessors described as devout and learned, rising before the speaker's
generation and burning as prophets.
role_refs:
- role:4
evidence_refs:
- ev:6
- id: fig:5
name_or_label: Teacher
description: In the cited parallel to O. 15, a teacher gives the judgment that Tablet
and Pen, heaven, and hell are within the self.
role_refs:
- role:5
evidence_refs:
- ev:9
roles:
- id: role:1
label: mortal contemplative speaker
assigned_to:
- fig:1
basis: The first-person voice reflects on passing life, afterlife uncertainty, and
inward heaven and hell.
evidence_refs:
- ev:1
- ev:8
- ev:10
- id: role:2
label: personified messenger-soul
assigned_to:
- fig:2
basis: The soul is sent through the Invisible and returns with an answer.
evidence_refs:
- ev:8
- id: role:3
label: non-returning dead or predecessors
assigned_to:
- fig:3
basis: They have passed through the door of Darkness and do not return to tell of
the road.
evidence_refs:
- ev:3
- id: role:4
label: prophetic or learned predecessors
assigned_to:
- fig:4
basis: They are called devout and learned, and as prophets, but their revelations
are described as stories told between sleep and sleep.
evidence_refs:
- ev:6
- id: role:5
label: instructing teacher
assigned_to:
- fig:5
basis: The Teacher explains that cosmic and afterlife objects are within the self.
evidence_refs:
- ev:9
symbols:
- id: sym:1
label: Hell
literal_form: Hell; threats of Hell; shadow from a soul on fire; spark from worries
associated_figures:
- fig:1
- fig:2
taxonomy_refs: []
evidence_refs:
- ev:1
- ev:8
- ev:10
- ev:11
- id: sym:2
label: Paradise or Heaven
literal_form: Paradise; Hopes of Paradise; Heaven as fulfilled desire; Paradise
as a tranquil moment
associated_figures:
- fig:1
- fig:2
taxonomy_refs: []
evidence_refs:
- ev:1
- ev:8
- ev:10
- ev:11
- id: sym:3
label: flower and tulips
literal_form: Flower once blown; withered tulips
associated_figures: []
taxonomy_refs: []
evidence_refs:
- ev:1
- ev:2
- id: sym:4
label: door of Darkness
literal_form: door of Darkness
associated_figures:
- fig:3
taxonomy_refs: []
evidence_refs:
- ev:3
- id: sym:5
label: road beyond death
literal_form: Road which all must travel; long road; road no traveller travels again
associated_figures:
- fig:1
- fig:3
taxonomy_refs: []
evidence_refs:
- ev:3
- ev:4
- ev:5
- id: sym:6
label: sleep
literal_form: Sleep from which prophets awake and to which they return
associated_figures:
- fig:4
taxonomy_refs: []
evidence_refs:
- ev:6
- ev:7
- id: sym:7
label: Invisible
literal_form: the Invisible through which the soul is sent
associated_figures:
- fig:1
- fig:2
taxonomy_refs: []
evidence_refs:
- ev:8
- id: sym:8
label: Tablet and Pen
literal_form: Tablet and Pen searched for beyond the heavens and then located within
the self
associated_figures:
- fig:2
- fig:5
taxonomy_refs: []
evidence_refs:
- ev:9
- id: sym:9
label: fire
literal_form: soul on fire; spark from worries
associated_figures:
- fig:1
taxonomy_refs:
- fire
evidence_refs:
- ev:10
- ev:11
- id: sym:10
label: watercourse of tears
literal_form: Jihun as a water-course worn by filtered tears
associated_figures:
- fig:1
taxonomy_refs:
- water
evidence_refs:
- ev:11
scenes:
- id: scene:1
label: Certainty of passing life and irreversible death
summary: The speaker contrasts uncertain threats and hopes about Hell and Paradise
with the certainty that life passes and the bloomed flower dies forever.
figure_refs:
- fig:1
symbol_refs:
- sym:1
- sym:2
- sym:3
evidence_refs:
- ev:1
- ev:2
- id: scene:2
label: Road through the door of Darkness
summary: The dead are described as having passed through a dark door and as unable
to return to tell the living about the road that the living must also travel.
figure_refs:
- fig:1
- fig:3
symbol_refs:
- sym:4
- sym:5
evidence_refs:
- ev:3
- ev:4
- ev:5
- id: scene:3
label: Prophetic revelations as sleep-stories
summary: Devout and learned predecessors are said to have offered revelations that
amount to stories or fables before returning to sleep, without making a road through
dark night.
figure_refs:
- fig:4
symbol_refs:
- sym:5
- sym:6
evidence_refs:
- ev:6
- ev:7
- id: scene:4
label: Soul sent through the Invisible
summary: The speaker sends his soul into the Invisible to learn about the afterlife;
the soul returns and identifies itself with Heaven and Hell.
figure_refs:
- fig:1
- fig:2
symbol_refs:
- sym:1
- sym:2
- sym:7
evidence_refs:
- ev:8
- id: scene:5
label: Afterlife realities found within the self
summary: A cited parallel has the soul seek Tablet and Pen, heaven, and hell beyond
the heavens, but a Teacher says these are within the self.
figure_refs:
- fig:2
- fig:5
symbol_refs:
- sym:1
- sym:2
- sym:8
evidence_refs:
- ev:9
- id: scene:6
label: Heaven and Hell as inward reflections
summary: Heaven and Paradise are described as fulfilled desire or tranquil time,
while Hell is associated with the shadow or spark of an inflamed or worried soul;
a noted parallel calls heaven and hell reflections of goodness and wrath.
figure_refs:
- fig:1
symbol_refs:
- sym:1
- sym:2
- sym:9
- sym:10
evidence_refs:
- ev:10
- ev:11
- ev:12
candidate_motifs:
- id: motif:1
label: life's transience and irreversible death
taxonomy_refs: []
basis: The flower that has bloomed dies forever, and the cited tulips do not bloom
again after withering.
evidence_refs:
- ev:1
- ev:2
confidence: high
cautions: No rebirth element is present in this passage.
- id: motif:2
label: non-return from the road of death
taxonomy_refs:
- afterlife_journey_map
basis: The dead pass through a dark doorway onto a road from which none returns
to tell the living, and the editor notes this as a recurring ruba'iyat image.
evidence_refs:
- ev:3
- ev:4
- ev:5
confidence: high
cautions: The route is described negatively as unknowable rather than mapped in
detail.
- id: motif:3
label: dark night without a road
taxonomy_refs:
- mystical_quest
basis: The cited parallel says the learned have not made a road out of the dark
night, but only told a fable and gone to sleep.
evidence_refs:
- ev:7
confidence: medium
cautions: The passage presents this as skepticism about revelatory knowledge, not
as a completed quest.
- id: motif:4
label: soul-journey seeking afterlife knowledge
taxonomy_refs:
- afterlife_journey_map
- mystical_quest
basis: The speaker sends his soul through the Invisible to spell out some letter
of the afterlife, and a parallel has the soul search beyond the heavens for Tablet
and Pen, heaven, and hell.
evidence_refs:
- ev:8
- ev:9
confidence: high
cautions: The journey returns inward rather than producing an external geography
of the afterlife.
- id: motif:5
label: heaven and hell internalized within the self
taxonomy_refs:
- wisdom
basis: The soul answers that it itself is Heaven and Hell, and the parallel states
that Tablet and Pen, heaven, and hell are within the self.
evidence_refs:
- ev:8
- ev:9
confidence: high
cautions: The taxonomy reference is broad; the passage frames the point as inward
insight rather than formal doctrine.
- id: motif:6
label: heaven and hell as reflections of inner states
taxonomy_refs:
- duality
basis: Heaven is fulfilled desire or tranquility, while Hell is an inner shadow,
spark, or reflection associated with fire, worry, wrath, and darkness.
evidence_refs:
- ev:10
- ev:11
- ev:12
confidence: high
cautions: The duality is psychological and metaphorical in the supplied passage.
comparison_claims:
- id: claim:1
claim: The passage itself identifies the road from which no traveller returns as
a recurring image within the ruba'iyat and cites parallel quatrains with the same
image.
claim_level: same_motif
target: recurring ruba'iyat image of the non-returning road
evidence_refs:
- ev:4
- ev:5
counter_evidence_refs: []
confidence: high
limitations: The comparison is limited to parallels cited by the editor in the supplied
passage.
- id: claim:2
claim: The passage reports that FitzGerald's heaven-and-hell imagery was influenced
by a Mantik ut-tair distich in which heaven and hell are reflections of inner
moral states.
claim_level: same_function
target: Mantik ut-tair distich 1866 on heaven and hell as reflections
evidence_refs:
- ev:12
counter_evidence_refs: []
confidence: medium
limitations: The claim of influence is the editor's statement in the passage; no
independent historical argument is supplied here.
evidence:
- id: ev:1
type: quote
locator: LXIII, lines 3552-3652
quote_or_summary: "“One thing at least is certain—This Life flies”; “The Flower
that once has blown for ever dies.”"
source_text_path: texts/public-domain/sufi/project-gutenberg/sufistic-quatrains-omar-khayyam.md
rights_note: Public domain source; short quotation used for evidence.
- id: ev:2
type: quote
locator: LXIII note, O. 35
quote_or_summary: "“The tulips that are withered will never bloom again.”"
source_text_path: texts/public-domain/sufi/project-gutenberg/sufistic-quatrains-omar-khayyam.md
rights_note: Public domain source; short quotation used for evidence.
- id: ev:3
type: quote
locator: LXIV, lines 3552-3652
quote_or_summary: "“myriads who / Before us pass'd the door of Darkness through”;
“Not one returns to tell us of the Road.”"
source_text_path: texts/public-domain/sufi/project-gutenberg/sufistic-quatrains-omar-khayyam.md
rights_note: Public domain source; short quotation used for evidence.
- id: ev:4
type: summary
locator: LXIV editorial note and C. 36
quote_or_summary: The editor says the image is constantly recurring; the cited C.
36 describes a road from which no traveller travels again.
source_text_path: texts/public-domain/sufi/project-gutenberg/sufistic-quatrains-omar-khayyam.md
rights_note: Public domain source; summarized evidence.
- id: ev:5
type: summary
locator: LXIV editorial note and C. 270
quote_or_summary: The cited C. 270 asks where any traveller on the long road has
returned to tell the secret, and warns that one will not come back.
source_text_path: texts/public-domain/sufi/project-gutenberg/sufistic-quatrains-omar-khayyam.md
rights_note: Public domain source; summarized evidence.
- id: ev:6
type: summary
locator: LXV, lines 3552-3652
quote_or_summary: The revelations of devout and learned prophetic predecessors are
described as stories told after waking from sleep before returning to sleep.
source_text_path: texts/public-domain/sufi/project-gutenberg/sufistic-quatrains-omar-khayyam.md
rights_note: Public domain source; summarized evidence.
- id: ev:7
type: summary
locator: LXV note, C. 127
quote_or_summary: The cited C. 127 says accomplished people became lights to others
but did not make a road out of the dark night; they told a fable and went to sleep.
source_text_path: texts/public-domain/sufi/project-gutenberg/sufistic-quatrains-omar-khayyam.md
rights_note: Public domain source; summarized evidence.
- id: ev:8
type: quote
locator: LXVI, lines 3552-3652
quote_or_summary: "“I sent my Soul through the Invisible”; the soul returned and
answered, “I myself am Heav'n and Hell.”"
source_text_path: texts/public-domain/sufi/project-gutenberg/sufistic-quatrains-omar-khayyam.md
rights_note: Public domain source; short quotation used for evidence.
- id: ev:9
type: summary
locator: LXVI note, O. 15
quote_or_summary: In the cited O. 15, the soul searches beyond the heavens for the
Tablet and Pen and for heaven and hell; the Teacher says they are within the self.
source_text_path: texts/public-domain/sufi/project-gutenberg/sufistic-quatrains-omar-khayyam.md
rights_note: Public domain source; summarized evidence.
- id: ev:10
type: quote
locator: LXVII, lines 3552-3652
quote_or_summary: "“Heav'n” is “the Vision of fulfill'd Desire,” and Hell is “the
Shadow from a Soul on fire” cast on darkness."
source_text_path: texts/public-domain/sufi/project-gutenberg/sufistic-quatrains-omar-khayyam.md
rights_note: Public domain source; short quotation used for evidence.
- id: ev:11
type: summary
locator: LXVII note, O. 33
quote_or_summary: The cited O. 33 describes the heavenly vault as a girdle from
a weary body, Jihun as a watercourse of tears, Hell as a spark from worries, and
Paradise as a tranquil moment.
source_text_path: texts/public-domain/sufi/project-gutenberg/sufistic-quatrains-omar-khayyam.md
rights_note: Public domain source; summarized evidence.
- id: ev:12
type: quote
locator: LXVII note, Mantik ut-tair distich 1866
quote_or_summary: 'The editor says FitzGerald was influenced by a distich: “Heaven
and hell are reflections,” one of goodness and the other of wrath.'
source_text_path: texts/public-domain/sufi/project-gutenberg/sufistic-quatrains-omar-khayyam.md
rights_note: Public domain source; short quotation used for evidence.
confidence:
extraction: high
motif_candidates: medium
comparison_claims: medium
notes: Extraction is based only on the supplied passage. Motif labels are cautious
because the passage is a poetic and editorial excerpt rather than a narrative
myth.
reviewer_status:
status: needs_review
reviewer: ''
reviewed_at: ''
notes: Machine-generated draft from OpenAI Batch; not human-reviewed.
extracted_by: openai_batch:gpt-5.5
extracted_at: '2026-04-28'
notes: |-
The supplied locator label mentions XLIV/XLVIII/LVIII/LXIII, while the passage text contains LXIII-LXVII; this discrepancy is preserved in the locator notes for review.
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